Score: 3

"Had a little twist toward the end"

submission: Little Red Riding Ho!

date: October 16, 2005

Somewhat tedious, not particularly funny,annoying to navigate and not really very good.

Score: 5

"Took too long to come up with a "tease""

submission: Bush Thinking

date: October 9, 2005

Would sit through it, but not mention it to someone or pass it on in a link

There was little context for the item outside of the title page.
Context could have been given if:
George felt a fly buzz 'round his ear, he feels annoyed so he grabs one of them there 'scopes' that 'medical folks' use and uses it to peer in HIS OWN EAR.

The physical incongrouity of looking inside one's own head ala Inside John Malkovitch would be a nice lead in.

Flash (no pun intended) visuals of Bush's thought stimulators could pinwheel by as he speaks