Score: 0

"visually a nightmare"

submission: How to review

date: April 22, 2008

so poor in design and execution, it fails terribly at its stated goals :(

inaudible audio (mostly)

horrible .flashing. seizure inducing "graphics" make it one of the poorest submissions ever

Score: 9

"lol"

submission: KKKramer Rap Video

date: April 22, 2008

good work, a little old news tho

Score: 10

"lol...amen!"

submission: Messed-Up Bible Stories 3

date: April 22, 2008

biblically accurate, hellishly funny!

Score: 5

"nothing too new , interesting"

submission: Alio's Army

date: April 22, 2008

the controls need to be redone.

click vs doubleclick causes fire errors.

maybe use additional keyboard controls

nice graphics, poor gameplay

Score: 6

"wonderful animation"

submission: Shadow Deathmatch

date: April 22, 2008

the total scene had excellent attention to detail, but the plot /script needs to be edited for brevity. Maybe have 14 second montage element to do the character development instead of having the damned thing drag on as it did.

still, this guy shows amazing potential

Score: 7

"I liked it!"

submission: The finger- Dane Cook

date: April 16, 2008

It was like a dub, but in reverse, the lip-sync work was awesome and yeah, do more!

I can tell you one thing, DC would just love it!

Comics often 'storyboard' their standup routines on a notepad, and thats what your flash kinda reminded me of.

Score: 5

"i agree w/cancelout"

submission: Trix Rabbit Justice Ad

date: April 16, 2008

Even though it is said to be more of an intro, in that case, it would benefit from tighter editing and be a bit shorter.

The part that kinda spoiled it for me was the GUN WAVING, Cigarette smoking Leprechaun - that was a bit off for a kid friendly ad, and yes either be funnier, or have more of a 'lead up for what is to follow"

Score: 5

"eh...."

submission: Obama Clinton Mash

date: April 15, 2008

well...not really as titled, since we have Bill & Pelosi there, with Obamma almost an afterthought...
oh well

Score: 3

"poor user interface."

submission: Cookie Monster Dress Up

date: April 15, 2008

the user interface is poorly thought out and implemented.

using the closets for the different clothing items is a good idea, but it doesnt help when cookie blocks the whole closet.

The "hide cookie" option is unhelpful.

the stage should be better laid out

Score: 6

"Not bad, even if not a "game""

submission: Elmo Dress Up Game

date: April 15, 2008

Very nice clear graphics, though its hard to see who the intended target was.

The arrangment and selection of the cloths was a bit hard for 3 year olds and didnt seem to have the content to grab the older ones.

Not really a 'game' as there were no goals or 'closure'
more like a little activity.

recommend.

more space between the clothes to make it easier to pick
a little animation (lock clothes in place)

a more 'intelligent elmo' - instead of mindlessly yammering, he could say at random "Thats elmo's shirt! or several phrases.
you can make 100's of phrases by breaking a sentence in to key elements and mix/matching the way you mix /match wardrobe elements, i.e.

--prefix---owner--- ---item name
This is + ELmo's + shoes
That is + My + hat
Its + Favorite + Shirt

elmo could randomly animate in periods of no activity

"Hey!" "play with me!" etc